Sunday, October 3, 2010

Comments on Morikubo Showtaro ~kyo~ Lyrics (+α)

Many of the lyrics that I added recently from the ~kyo~ album were pretty difficult to translate, or at least to make sense of, so I'll write some comments.

dizzy candy

誰か!目覚めるアイツをキメておくれよ
I have no idea what this means.
"Somebody! Awakening him/her/that guy, please (?)"
決める most often means "to decide" but here it's written in katakana, which means that it uses a slang meaning, I guess?
決める also has the meanings "to score a goal" and "to wear tasteful clothes", but neither makes sense to me.

アイツ also appears later in the lyrics too, where I just translated it as her, which might not be correct.

DoPaMiNe

果てる間も無いくらい激しくイカせてくれ
"Make me come so hard that I don't even have time to finish"

Writing these comments, I changed the translation of this line to how I literally understand it, and it makes no sense.
果てる can mean the same as イく, " to have an orgasm."

Never surrender

落ち出してく

落ちてく "go falling"
落ち出す "start falling"
落ち出してく "start to go falling" What?

UNDER CONSTRUCTION

ひび割れた隙間から滲んだ不完全なモニュメント
How can a monument ooze from a crack remains a mystery to me. Maybe because it's incomplete? :P

Ride Free

排気の悪いBODY蹴っ飛ばして
Since the lyrics refer to riding a motorcycle, "badly ventilated" is probably wrong, but I don't know anything about motorcycles, so...

攻め続けていくワインディングロード
"I keep attacking the winding road"

Not sure about this translation.

捉えたこの大地に
"this ground that I've grasped"

Likewise.

never ends...

星降る
"stars are countless"

Literally this means "stars rain", but if that happened life would end very soon.

"星降る夜 - a night sky full of stars; a star‐spangled night"
From 研究社 新英和・和英中辞典

Build Up!!!【鍛】

Luna sent me the lyrics for this song. They were probably copied by someone who doesn't understand Japanese as they contained errors:
僧帽筋(trapezius muscle) was written as 僧帽菌(trapezius bacteria? Such a word doesn't exist)
"肘は高い位置でKeep" was "宙は高い位置でKeep" which makes no sense.
"栄養学も見逃せねぇぜ" was "栄養学も見返せねぇぜ" which means "Musn't look back at dietetics!"

反動をつけるのはNo good
"It's no good to apply recoil"

I'm not sure if this makes any sense. I did found other usage examples of "反動をつける" with Google, but I still don't understand what it exactly means.



By the way, the +α in the title is a wasei eigo (Japanese-made English): プラスアルファ. It means: "and a little extra." The extra was Build Up, since it's not in ~kyo~. :P

Voice Crew Videos #588 & #698



This video is once again about the blood type nonsense.
For about 20 years I lived happily unaware that my blood type was supposed to affect my personality, before I heard about it on some Japanese TV show. :)
They don't seem to realize it, but here Fujita Saki debunks the whole thing by saying:
"They are all Cancerian A types, but they all have different personalities."

Anyway, when I was translating these videos I noticed that maybe I should have translated the introductions as "We are the 20th personalities..."
Oh well...
Morikubo forgets to say "personality" and instead just says "20th Morikubo" at the end.





Nothing much to say about this video; it was quite easy to translate.

Tuesday, August 10, 2010

森久保祥太郎 - 牙月

I'm not sure if "flower of life" should be "flowers of life"?

闇を往くよ
I haven't seen the kanji 往 used for yuku that much, but apparently it doesn't differ from 行 that much.

羅刹 is rakshasa, an evil spirit who devours human flesh, but I decided to just use the word demon.

呼吸止まる刻(とき)まで literally means "Until the moment my breathing stops", but I don't think that sounds very good in English.

後ろの正面は誰
At first I didn't understand what this meant, but apparently it's from a children's game Kagome, Kagome.


Sunday, July 18, 2010

About The Copying of My Translations

It seemed to me as hypocrisy to put a notice on my site which said, "copying of the translations without permission is not allowed", so I didn't.
As I myself upload the original lyrics of the artists without permission.

The only notice I have on my site is "For educational purposes only", i.e. you can educate yourself on what the lyrics etc. (might) mean.

I know that the only way to protect your work from not being copied without permission is simply not to post it on the Internet at all.

I don't have anything against people using my translations, even without asking permission; posting them on their blog, translating them to other languages or making karaoke videos, as long as they give credit to me.

Although I'd rather have people not use my translations at all, since they're not that good and I try to improve them every now and then. :)

If you use my translations, put a notice where you got them from – a link to my site.
This should be Internet common sense.

The biggest copying of my translations that I've noticed is the posting of my Onmyo-za lyrics translations to LyricWiki without permission.
I thought for a moment about removing the whole section from my site, but decided not to.
For now, I've added a notice to the Onmyo-za page on my site.

Friday, July 16, 2010

Voice Crew #585 and #598



In the first video I had some trouble figuring out what Morikubo says in the beginning.
It seems to be "人生を是正してます", but I'm not 100% sure.
I don't think I've ever heard the word 是正(ぜせい) before, but it isn't that rare a word.

In the video they use the word 店(みせ) which I've just translated as "shop", but I guess they mean specialized ice cream shops.

There were also quite a few onomatopoetic words and here's how I decided to translate them:
さらさら - dry
しっとり - moist
ふわーん - lightly
ほわー - whoaa (don't know if this is exactly what she means, but the words are somewhat similar)

At the end, at about 4:55, Morikubo doesn't say it very clearly, but I think he says:
"今年の夏は皆さん、Dippin' dotsで"





Here at the beginning they use the Japanese greeting お疲れ様, which doesn't have an exact English equivalent. I used "Good work today".

Other than that, there isn't much to say about this translation.
Making it was pretty straightforward.

Saturday, July 10, 2010

陰陽座 - 帝図魔魁譚 Comments

Judging by its title, this song might be a reference to http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Teito_Monogatari. But I can't say for sure since I'm not familiar with that.

Some comments:

現存する雜魚の群に 畏る者は皆無
現存 literally means "to exist currently."
EDIT: First I put this as "living", but I've changed it to "extant."

祝いと呪いの 苧環紡げば
The sentence seems to be left incomplete: "if you/when you/once you've spun... (then what)".

彼の魁岸は星の蔭に 巡り続けるだろう
この開成も月の影を 照らし続けるだろう
I don't have a clue what these two lines are actually trying to say.
In the end I decided to leave the two uncommon words untranslated.
EDIT: I've changed them to English words.

魁岸(かいがん) means "to have a big and strong build". It's apparently a na-adjective, but is used here as if it were a noun. Kōjien has no usage examples for this word.
開成(かいせい) means "to develop human knowledge and to complete one's undertaking".

星の蔭 and 月の影 literally mean "the shade of the stars" and "the shadow of the moon".

懇願する烏合の衆 取るに足らぬ拝舞
拝舞(はいむ) is a sort of "gratitude dance" performed at a conferment/appointment. First you turn the upper part of your body left, then right and again left and bow.

能書きだの蘊蓄だの 蛆でも喰わない
蘊蓄(うんちく) has the original meaning of "vast stock of knowledge", but currently in everyday conversations it is used with the meaning "trivia".

Monday, July 5, 2010

Why Was Hideki Called Chack?



I came across this very precious video where Ryuichi talks to Hideki on his radio show "Midnight Rock City", and I decided to make a transcription and a translation.
R = Ryuichi
I = Imamura :)

R: えっと、今日はですね、スペシャル企画と申しましょうか?
インディーズナイトとして送りする2時間なんですけども。
まあ、一人目のゲストと言いますかね、SIAM SHADEのイマスくんに来ていただきました。
こんばんは。
R: Let's see, tonight we have a special program, or how should I put it?
It's a two hour program we've dubbed "Indies Night".
Well, here's our first guest, SIAM SHADE's Imas.
Good evening.

I: よろしく、こんにちは。
I: Thank you, good day.

R: えーっと、今日はですね、あの、なぜイマスくんと言うのか?デモテープにはCHACKって書いてあるんですけど。
何でイマスって言うあだ名というか愛称みたいなのついたんでしょう?
R: Let's see... Tonight— Um, why are you called Imas, when on the demo tape it says Chack?
Where did you get this nickname Imas from?

I: スキッド・ロウのヴォーカルにセバスチャン・バックつー人がいまして・・・
その人を意識してんじゃないか?とか皆に言われて、で無理矢理つけられたあだ名がイマスチャン・チャックだったんで、そっから
I: There is this person called Sebastian Bach who is the vocalist of Skid Row.
So, everyone was saying to me: "You trying to imitate him?" and forced on me this nickname: "Imastian Chack", that's how...

R: 今もイマスと呼ばれてると?
お客さんにもイマスと呼ばれてるんですよね?
R: And you're still called Imas?
And your fans also call you Imas, right?

I: そうですね、はい。
I: Yes, that's true.

R: で、多分今こうやってイマスくんと話してても知らない人が多いと思うんですよ、ラジオ聴いてる方。
まだ結成して半年というバンドなんでね。
で、簡単なプロフィールというか・・・
どんなバンドで?何人組みで?どんな人がいるのか?って簡単に言ってもらえますか?
R: Well, as I'm talking to you right now, I'm sure that there are many listeners who don't know who you are.
After all, your band was only formed half a year ago.
So, as a simple profile...
What kind of band is it? How many members? What kind of people are they? Could you tell us briefly?

I: えっとですね、五人編成で・・・えーっと一応ツインヴォーカルが売り物って言うバンドなんですけど、はい。
I: Let's see. It's a five piece band... Um, it's a band whose specialty is the twin vocals.

R: で、ギターも二人ですよね。
R: And, there are two guitarists too, right?

I: ギターも二人です。
I: There are.

R: で、かたっぽのギターの人が歌を歌うっていう?
R: And, the other guitarist also sings?

I: そうです。
I: Yes.

R: その人がソロもとるんですか?
R: Does he also play solos?

I: あ、とる部分もあります、はい。
I: Oh, sometimes he does, yes.

R: じゃ、ツインギターの比重としては両方の人がソロをとったり、バッキングを弾いたりと?
R: Then, the weight of the twin guitars goes so, that both of them play solos and rhythm?

I: はい。
I: Yes.

R: んー・・・そうか、イマスくんは何か楽器を弾かないんですか?
R: Hmm... Is that so? Do you play any instruments?

I: 一応エレクトーンだけなんですが、はい。
I: Only the electronic organ.

R: ま、今日来ていただいたのは他でもない、僕らの故郷であるプレイハウスのハヤマさんの今イチオシのバンドということで来ていただいたんですけど。
ま、今日ですね、きっと、本当に知らない人がまだ多いと思うんで、一曲とりあえず聴いてもらうかなと思ってるんですけど。
R: Well, the reason why you are here today is that your band is the band which Mr. Hayama from Play House, which is our home ground, is currently pushing the most.
Well, I think that there are many of those who don't know you, so I was thinking of having them listen to one of your songs.

I: お願いします。
I: Thank you.

R: じゃ、一曲聴いてもらいましょう、SIAM SHADEで「END OF LOVE」。
R: All right, listen to this song, "End Of Love" by SIAM SHADE.